Good presentation and use of pictures. However it was a little brief. More facts would have improved the page.
AP
M
M
Good information which is written in a clear way. maybe more facts would make it a better page. Again a good presentation and good use of lots of pictures.
AR
M
M
Super information and very well written and clearly presented, well done. Good use of pictures and colour.
AV
A
A
I like the style of this page and it is enjoyable to read. however there are only a few facts for each element and there are quite a few spelling/typing errors.
BH
M
M
Good information and well presented, with a good use of colour and pictures, well done. Good facts but watch out for spelling errors.
CB
N
A
Only 2 elements completed, so did not fulfill the task. which is a shame.
CG
4
4
Fabulous photos and nicely presented, well done. Good use of colour but I think that using different colours for different parts of the text would enhance the presentation.
CS
3
3
Great facts and well written (I am asuming it is in your own words). good picture and I think more pictures and colour would enhance the presentation
DB
3
4
Lots of great photos which result in a well presented page, well done. Good facts too and nicely written, need to watch for spelling/typing errors
EB
3
2
Great information, well done. However it would be more inviting to the reader if the text was broken up with the use of colour and more pictures and/or diagrams.
EC
E
M
Super work, clear concise facts and the use of diagrams helped enhance the page. Great link to relevant videos and I agree the second one is cool. Too much underlining for my liking.
EM
0
0
Not even attempted!!!!
EP
3
3
Lovely picture and good facts, well done. The use of colour helps the presentation but I think you you will need to add more detail next time as some of the facts were a bit brief
ES
A
A
A nicely presented page with clear facts written in a clear way, although silver lacked information. Good use of pictures too.
GB
4
3
Great information and I like the written style of presentation, well done. good use of colour, but maybe having a few more colours and pictures would enhance the look of it. I think the picture you have is too small.
GG
2
2
You have some great facts but the style of writing indicates that it is not in your own words. You have not completed all the questions on the task page and although the use of different fonts is good, it lacks colour and pictures.
JC
N
A
Only 2 elements completed so you have not fulfuilled the task.
JE
0
1
Nice pictures, but where is the rest?
JT
M
M
Again some really good facts that are mostly written well. A nice layout with the pictures and good inclusion of links to other sites and bibliography.
JW
A
A
I like the picture and it is a shame there is not more. The facts are there but there are not many of them and it would be better if the information on the elements was separated more so it is clearer to see them.
KH
A
A
Good facts but they seem to be copied and pasted rather than written in your own words. Good diagrams but next time try to use different fonts to help enhance the page.
KP
3
3
Good pictures and facts, well done. I like the use of colour it makes it look good.
LC
4
4
I know that you work could not be uploaded into the page in the style that you had done originally and not all the information would upload. the original piece is well presented and has good facts with pictures and diagrams.
LS
N
N
Nothing here. What happened to the work you did in class?
MO
3
2
Good information and pictures, well done. However the way it is written indicates that it is not in your own words and the text does not really invite the reader to read it. Next time break the text up using pictures, use colour to make it more attractive and write it in your own style
MP
2
3
Nice facts and clearly presented. You have not answered all of the questions on the task page and i think more pictures would enhance the presentation.
MS
4
3
Fabulous facts and well written, well done. I think the use of more colours and pictures would enhance the presentation.
MSk
2
2
Great pictures and good facts, although you did not answer all the questions on the task page. Aim to include more detail next time and include more colour to enhance the presentation
NC
N
N
Nicely presented information but only one element done, not 3 and no pictures or diagrams.
ND
3
3
a nice colourful page, well done. great facts and you have broken up the text to make it more inviting to the reader. Aim to put more pictures in next time.
NH
E
M
Super and very interesting information, which has been written in in clear and very readable way. Well done. Great pictures especially the atomic structures, but I would still like to see more colour on the page to make it more eye-catching.
PP
A
M
A lovely presented page, eye-catching and easy to read. Good pictures but next time aim for more facts
RF
A
A
Much better work. Good information, but not all of it was written in your own words. Nicely presented and I liked all the diagrams.
RK
M
M
A really good page. Lots of information written in a clear and concise way and good use of suitable pictures. Well done
SM
A
A
Good page. The facts are written clearly, although a few spelling/typing errors and good use of suitable pictures.
SN
A
M
Great presentation again, but again the facts tend to be the bare minimum and not worthy of your reasearch skills.
SR
2
4
Good use of colour, pictures and fonts to invite the reader to your page. there are some good facts here but you have not completed all the questions on the task page.
SS
4
4
Great work, well done. You have presented all the facts in a clear and concise way and included good diagrams. The use of colour in the text may enhance the look of it next time.
TC
2
2
Good facts presented clearly. It is a shame that there are not more of them.
TM
Nothing there
VG
4
2
Good facts, but the page lacks colour and does not really invite the reader. Aim to use more colour and pictures, and break up the text a bit more.
VT
0
3
I love the slide show, well done. it is a shame about the lack of facts though!
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A/M/E
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